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I am a professional graphic designer and right now I am moon lighting as a toy customizer. Every waking minute outside of work I commit to painting and sculpting custom toys.

Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Revised

So after getting a message from a friend it became evident that the person at the top falling off the cliff wasn't quite distinct enough to clearly be read as a person. So this is the revised version. Is this one more clear? Better? Worse? I need some feedback. Leave me a comment or email me.

Thanks.

3 comments:

  1. I think this one is more clear. The white helps to show its a person more-so then it just being a silhouette like the first version.

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    1. Thanks Tyler! I'm revising the woman even further to be more black and she's leaning further off the cliff. I think It's almost there.

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